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Short story done for [link](Your World Literature Contest: Year II) - Good vs Evil.
Thanks to #44DragonsProject for putting it on! :love:

Its a little dark, but not too macabre, is it?

Anyways, wish me luck!!

EDIT: I got third place =D and...

A DLD!!!
:faint: ... Thank you :iconkneelingglory: for featuring "The Queens Justice" [link] !! :love:


cheers! :ahoy:
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Starsickle's avatar
Neat short concept - I feel like there should be more here for our new queen. What was it like when she was told she had to do this? Is she a good ruler or is she bumbling into this? Who is around her that she's doing her own executions that she has no idea why?

There should probably be more detail and background. The picture into her head should give hints to her personality and understanding thus far. She was clearly alive before this, and obviously had a right to the throne - it makes sense she'd not be ignorant of what's going on in general. Perhaps she's being handled by advisors?